From 324d6bc6aae046fdf319a43ef93cc9474a9961b5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: nbd <nbd@3c298f89-4303-0410-b956-a3cf2f4a3e73>
Date: Sun, 18 Feb 2007 16:46:46 +0000
Subject: add documentation fixes from #1285
git-svn-id: svn://svn.openwrt.org/openwrt/trunk@6319 3c298f89-4303-0410-b956-a3cf2f4a3e73
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docs/adding.tex | 16 ++++++++--------
docs/init-scripts.tex | 4 ++--
2 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)
diff --git a/docs/adding.tex b/docs/adding.tex
index 34e13aea5..2695a764f 100644
--- a/docs/adding.tex
+++ b/docs/adding.tex
@@ -121,15 +121,15 @@ Scroll over the firmware to find printable words that can be significant.
\subsubsection{Amount of flash memory}
-Linux can hardly fit in a 2MB flash device, once you have open the device and
-located the flash chip, try to find other the Internet its characteristics. If
+Linux can hardly fit in a 2MB flash device, once you have opened the device and
+located the flash chip, try to find its characteristics on the Internet. If
your flash chip is a 2MB or less device, your device is most likely to run a
proprietary OS such as WindRiver VxWorks, or a custom manufacturer OS like Zyxel ZynOS.
-OpenWrt does not currently run on devices which have equal or less than 2MB of
-flash memory. This limitation will probably not be worked around since those
-devices are most of the time micro routers, or Wireless Access Points, which are
-not the main OpenWrt target.
+OpenWrt does not currently run on devices which have 2MB or less of flash memory.
+This limitation will probably not be worked around since those devices are most
+of the time micro-routers, or Wireless Access Points, which are not the main
+OpenWrt target.
\subsubsection{Pluging a serial port}
@@ -140,8 +140,8 @@ easily notice if the device uses a Linux kenrel or something different.
\subsection{Finding and using the manufacturer SDK}
Once you are sure your device run a Linux based firmware, you will be able to start
-hacking on it. If the manufacturer respect the GPL, it will have release with the
-device, a Sample Development Kit.
+hacking on it. If the manufacturer respected the GPL, it will have released a Sample
+Development Kit with the device.
\subsubsection{GPL violations}
diff --git a/docs/init-scripts.tex b/docs/init-scripts.tex
index e1d96a249..ea74ded7c 100644
--- a/docs/init-scripts.tex
+++ b/docs/init-scripts.tex
@@ -24,8 +24,8 @@ This is done by the wrapper script \texttt{/etc/rc.common}.
script should provide. \texttt{start()} is called when the user runs \texttt{/etc/init.d/httpd start}
or (if the script is enabled and does not override this behavior) at system boot time.
-Enabling and disabling init scripts is done by running \texttt{/etc/init.d/\textit{name} start}
-or \texttt{/etc/init.d/\textit{name} stop}. This creates or removes symbolic links to the
+Enabling and disabling init scripts is done by running \texttt{/etc/init.d/\textit{name} enable}
+or \texttt{/etc/init.d/\textit{name} disable}. This creates or removes symbolic links to the
init script in \texttt{/etc/rc.d}, which is processed by \texttt{/etc/init.d/rcS} at boot time.
The order in which these scripts are run is defined in the variable \texttt{START} in the init
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